Mother

You gave me more than I ever needed
Craving to satisfy me against all odds
Accepting my flaws with optimism
Tolerating my extravagance with pains
Suffering in silence for my crimes
Seeking to shield me from the troubles of life
Sold her pride for my sustenance

But ignorance became my friend
Stealing into my mind with aplomb
Till naivety steels in my attire
My ambition filled with illusion

But there she is, suffering in negligence
For despite her obvious versatility
Her consent matters not
“Control is brevity”, I thought

Alas, consequences abound
Seeking to check my excesses
Its offense stronger than expected
Till I lost all I ever had
But behold, she is the Lord
And I thought, if only I treated her with care
Oh “Mother”! I took from you what I couldn’t give

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/24/2024 11:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:36:00 PM
What an awesome poem! Have a nice day.
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