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Morning Hawk

Morning hawk tears through the land like a lightning bolt direct and true. Morning hawk screeches like thunder her voice echoing in the canyons. Morning hawk finds a higher perch her eyes sharp and her wings readied. Morning hawk feels strange in the light— no one sees her, no one seeks her. Mourning hawk watches the light leave the sky like a dream fading from the mind. Mourning hawk does not build a nest, for the night has decided, and her heart is respite. Mourning hawk knows tomorrow is no more and how soon will she fly again, alone and free?

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Date: 2/17/2025 8:10:00 AM
Laura, this ends in a sober way. I can identify with this feeling, as it is where I believe the human race is headed if we don't wake up and change fast. You write in a way that encompasses many situations and feelings. We get to put meaning to the words. You really write as a gentle soul rather than a sledge hammer. Your poetry is wonderful. Smiles!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/22/2025 2:48:00 PM
This is a personal one for me.. it’s sobering, perhaps … but it is steely, resilient. I hope I can have her strength… much love … your positivity is valuable to me<3

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