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Misleading

All I see in a superficial world, Are fake grins, Snotty comment, Catty remarks, I'm silent in the wings, Hidden, Seen only by my fellow shadows. But we who are the silent, We see the knives in the backs, The disgustingly sweet smiles that mask malevolent intent. I can see through the fake silence To the inner cacophony. Real silence is lost to the petty, Who have small minds for all they talk about are others. Not one of us dares to step in and wipe off the face that they wear But I am tired I hate to see the ignorant people Who pretend to know everything, But I feel the need to tell them that what resides in their heads is nothing but fluff. I pity this misguided youth, Who are taught that they are never good enough. So I step out of the shadows, And wipe away the paint.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/17/2015 12:58:00 AM
This is another great poem from you. Every line is true and marvelous. Have yourself a nice weekend.
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:37:00 PM
Cheyanne... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Cheyanne
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:58:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Cheyanne :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/3/2014 7:53:00 AM
"Seen only by my fellow shadows", really like this line.... great stuff... really good;
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:40:00 PM
Cheyanne,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2014 10:39:00 AM
I love how you express yourself in your poetry and your comment down below...Keep writing! You have a powerful pen!
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:43:00 PM
This is totally true....oh man, I hate these kind of people with a passion (I still love the person but not their actions - heck no!). I love this poem! Filled with angst and truth put together. Mean people should be tossed into the dump! haha! This day in age is crazy, isn't it? I sometimes feel that I'm not that good enough either. Ignorance is not bliss...in some sense... I love the first and last lines best. The whole thing in general is awesomely put together nice and neat, packaged well!
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Cheyanne C.
Date: 4/28/2014 7:38:00 PM
Thanks! With my poetry, I feel like I can express myself better than I can with my art or speaking... Ya know what I mean? And I hate how people in my generation think that they are so much better... People are people, no matter how different.
Date: 4/27/2014 2:43:00 AM
Cheyanne, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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Cheyanne C.
Date: 4/28/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Linda, for your warm welcome.
Date: 4/26/2014 4:38:00 PM
Ps., Sometimes, one can just sense as feel there is something Special of another and, You, Are that moment; going to faves...
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Date: 4/26/2014 4:35:00 PM
Not only do I love your beautiful name but I dig this poem as, her powerful voice...Love, Jeremy
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Cheyanne C.
Date: 4/28/2014 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Jeremy. This was actually written as I lost my patience with some girls in my math class...

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