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MILL TOWN

In town of Holy Face, now Halez Fax Are rows of back-to-backs in terraces Between the mills that spill their thick black smoke. Industry now dominates hill and dale. Manufacture is master with muscle. Sulphuric fumes poison the once green hills Turning the trees to charcoal skeletons. The peaceful sound of silence that once was Is killed by loud clatter from textile mills And clogs clomping up the steep cobbled streets With steel segs grinding on the granite setts As folk trudge to-and-fro in day’s routine, Between the terrace rows of back-to-backs In that old mill town known as Halez Fax.

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Date: 6/30/2024 5:05:00 AM
A picture Lowry may have painted had he lived in Yorkshire. You describe Halifax back then so well. It played such a pivotal role in the Industrial Revolution. Fine write Tony. Your poem made me look up the origin of the name Halifax: “..from the Old English halh-gefeaxe, meaning "area of coarse grass in the nook of land” Cheers - Gary
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 6/30/2024 7:12:00 AM
Thanks for this. There seem to be a few ideas about the origin of the name. I see on the Halifax coat of arms there is a bearded man's face with eyes closed and a golden halo above. Perhaps John the Baptist? Hence 'holy face' or Halez Fax. Motto: Except the Lord keep the city.
Date: 6/29/2024 7:29:00 PM
It doesn't sound like a very pleasant town. Great description though
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 6/30/2024 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. It was not the most pleasant of towns. But that was the price to pay for industrialisation.
Date: 6/29/2024 12:36:00 PM
oh gosh what a descriptive write about the mill town of 'Halifax' I especially love the imagery of the back to back houses and the fumes and the noise of the clogs on the cobbles - excellent ink Tony! hugs jan xx
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 6/30/2024 6:54:00 AM
Pleased you enjoyed this. I have vivid memories of the smoke, the smell, the noise. Industry surely was master. But it did provide jobs for most. Sadly the natural world suffered from all this industry. Tony X

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