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Message In a Bottle-Hic-Kash

The unquenching thirst of a desert, I am carrying in my heart from times immemorial needs another bottle; please send me Darling one more bottle full of love quickly, hic! ========================== Placement:5th;(March 2011) Contest:Message in a bottle Sponsor:Linda-Marie the SweetHeart By :kashinath karmakar (3rd March 2011)

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Date: 3/9/2011 5:15:00 AM
made me smile - thanks
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:58:00 PM
Delightfully funny!!! I'll drink a toast to your win...(hic) !
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:43:00 AM
Great write, Kashinath - and congratulations to you : ) Jack
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:44:00 AM
Super congratulations for this win dear friend.
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:56:00 AM
Hello Kashinath, Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is wonderful...Very witty indeed Lov, Shar
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:07:00 AM
way to go Kashinath :) definitely enjoyed your nonet here :) Super congrats on your win :) keep writing your wonderful poems :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:52:00 AM
Kash, thanks for the smiles, was a joy to read this one again.. congratulations on your win in Linda's contest :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:16:00 AM
Haha very cool Kash. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:14:00 AM
haha. very cool Kash. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:49:00 PM
YEAAA, you scored pretty high, Kash. SO glad to see you here. A big congratulations. this was darling!
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:41:00 PM
So great to see you in the top five in this one Kashinath Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:56:00 PM
a toast to you for the happy win, kashi.. hic! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine 5th Place Win in the contest, Kashinath. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congratulationsn on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, kashinath
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:01:00 PM
Congrats my dear Kashinmath!!! well deserved...always Michael
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your success in my contest.. excellent and exciting message luv.. thankxx for your support...
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:12:00 AM
hehe, witty Nonet, had me laughing out loud Kash :)
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Date: 3/5/2011 10:50:00 AM
haha, your title alone made me snicker and reading the entire nonet made me laugh-- very witty *hic!* thanks for dropping by my poems :) & leaving such inspiring comments Kashinath :)
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:02:00 PM
hahaha, what a cute ending this one has, Kashinath!! I must have been in a huge rush today to have missed seeing this one was here. Let me see if I missed anything else (I'm worried they are closing the site in this hour for maintenance!)
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:45:00 AM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Kash. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:29:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Kashinath ..good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer luv.. so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of the piece.happy weekend ...
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:19:00 PM
A good looking nonet for the contest, Kashinath.
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:42:00 PM
Cool take on the contest, Kashinath. Witty and creative. (But don't spend too much time staring at the bottom of an empty bottle.) Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2011 7:15:00 PM
hilarious, kashi,, what a bottle can do! extemely interesting! winning streak in the contest and visit me,,:) huggs, nette
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