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Lune - Serenity

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delicate the music of a serene piano melody soothing for souls let it flow now become a white swan drifting in peace ______________________ May 10, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Lune/Serenity Copyright Protected, ID 20-1251-169-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Flow With The Collum Lune sponsor, nette oncloud, inspiration - Visual #1 Second Place

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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2020 2:51:00 PM
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Serenity flowing through your words, Constance - so delicate like the undisturbed face of water. Love the swan metaphor! This reminds me so of Moonlight Sonata. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:31:00 PM
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Sam, thanks for the congratulations and for the compliment on my poem, I was thinking Claire de Lune while writing _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 9:54:00 PM
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Very peaceful! Congratulations, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:31:00 PM
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Kim, thanks for the congratulations and visit _Constance
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/13/2020 6:59:00 PM
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Beautiful images in remembering the music of the old piano. So peacul. SuZ
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:32:00 PM
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SuZ, thanks for the visit and compliment on my poem _Constance
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/13/2020 6:48:00 PM
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Congratulations on a fine win in Nette's contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:33:00 PM
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Mohan, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/13/2020 12:09:00 PM
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"A white swan drifting in peace"...loved the metaphor. Congratulations! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:21:00 PM
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Aditi, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/10/2020 10:36:00 PM
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Constance, music, Swan dance, what else is required? Good Luck. Mohan
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Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2020 8:37:00 AM
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Mohan, thanks for visiting, I was imagining Claire de Lune actually _Constance
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/10/2020 12:40:00 PM
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superb imagery, I especially like the second stanza Constance, I've not even seen the contest yet hope I can write before it closes!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 2:23:00 PM
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Jan, thanks for the visit and the compliment, you have time the contest just started _Constance

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