Lune - Forsaken

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old damaged piano once caressed by skilled fingers now silenced forever what masterly hands unlocked pure magical music via your ivory keys May 12, 2020 ~5th Place~ Contest: Flow With The Collum Lune - Visual 1 Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Judged: 05/13/2020

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/13/2020 10:17:00 PM

some of them are out-of-tune but that adds to the nostalgia. Good one, Sandra, I enjoyed it, as a pianist.

John Watt

Date: 5/13/2020 1:48:00 PM

Sandra, there's just something so nostalgic and melancholy about an old piano. You captured this well, congrats on your win ~ John

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2020 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations on being included in Nette's final winners' list, Sandra...no mean feat! Your musing seems to want to bring memories back to life. ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2020 7:48:00 AM

lovely interpretation of the image Sandra I too chose this picture. hope you and the family are all well during these trying times:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/12/2020 7:46:00 AM

Love your interpretation of the picture Sandra, Good luck in the contest Tom