Love Sifting

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last third of the night. sifting through torrents of love. to feed sky and stars

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/10/2022 2:32:00 PM

Romantic element to this haiku, very nice write…Delice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2022 4:16:00 AM

A beautiful snapshot of an early rising sun. That is a beautiful time of day. Also, a time for romance. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/8/2022 7:17:00 PM

How beautiful, Lasaad!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2022 6:27:00 AM

Sunrise as depicted by nature is indeed fabulous.

Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2022 7:53:00 PM

In the twilight hours of the morning, the sky assumes a rare brilliance, may be because God's love comes down most at that time.... A lovely image and hiku, dear Lasaad