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Longing Sensual Passion

pure carnal LONGING fleshly desires for your graze- sensory stimulation touched by sultry hands an e m b r a c e too soft for words- physical endearing taste seizing my caress craving an e n v e l o p e d kiss- true love and PASSION combined enclosed in your arms s t r o k e d with tender cherished hands- surrounded by your traced scent breath of your essence t h i r s t y for your tenderness- relishing IN all you are warmth in your sweet arms gentle infatuation- devoted to L O V E M A K I N G Form S Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings July 25, 2017

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/16/2017 3:09:00 AM

I SO love your work, Laura, and this is no exception ... exquisitely sensual and penned with rhythm and grace ... love it! Congrats on your win, my friend! <3

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/15/2017 8:47:00 PM

A very sensual and passionate poem Laura. I thoroughly enjoyed every sexy and tender line :) congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2017 7:52:00 PM

One passionate poem girl,,, congratulations on your wonderful win ~*

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2017 9:34:00 AM

This is hot Laura! I expect it will do well.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/27/2017 7:25:00 AM

Beautifully and passionately expressed Laura...best of luck my friend...but I smell a winner...^WW^

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/26/2017 8:35:00 AM

Passionately written, Laura:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2017 6:44:00 PM

Laura, I had thought of doing sedoka too. Constance will love this. It's very sensual. My favorite line is this one: an e m b r a c e too soft for words- (that is so sweet)