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Longing For Saturday

As Friday ends in tumbling hours, may the starlight kiss your lips while I rest in the arms of dreams unrefined... I may not be with you in the flambe of a gauzy night caved by dreary toil but, whisper a note for me as the breeze sways a hammock of an embrace fondled by the new moon. I humble myself in your presence not, still, wait for me to disrobe this façade, while you can, then… remember days like other days, when tokens of warmest joy begin to unfurl this coiled silhouette dug in a pile of cinder while my eyes long for Saturday's glow: and when the lamp post of byways are streaked with our fonts' names, where the brink of my dreams awaken in your garden of misty eyes so green, wait for me. ............... Submitted for Brian's Choice F

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Date: 7/14/2016 9:02:00 PM
Beautifully written, Nette! Congrats on your win!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/16/2020 3:58:00 AM
thanks!..it's a new poem never entered with Dheart as sponsor....
Date: 7/14/2016 10:15:00 AM
Wonderful write!!! Can feel the longing. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:41:00 AM
A great poem... as always. Congratulations on the well earned win.
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Date: 7/13/2016 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your fabulous win. Your romantic heart can charm any man! Beautifully written with those sentimental lines you only can create. Have a terrific day. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/13/2016 6:59:00 AM
This magnificent poem makes any man's knees tremble! If i were he, I'll go and fetch you now!
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:19:00 AM
Top- notch poetry! The sense of sultry-sweet anticipation drives me to wait for a weekend's merriment "while my eyes long for Saturday's glow: "
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Date: 5/12/2016 6:14:00 PM
Nette, Saturday is right around the bend...he better wait!!! :-)
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Date: 5/12/2016 3:14:00 PM
A sensual write my friend, if they don't wait for you after this poem then their heart is cold
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