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Long Johns State of the Union

The clothesline hung, low, and limp. Raucous, red, long johns and worn, white, blue jeans pinned like butterflies in a box; dangled bodiless. The neighbors all envied Mom’s skill. Nobodies tidy whities were brighter. The pulley wheel whined and clanked against back porch clapboards when a stiff wind blew through. And, the state of your laundry was like the state of the union jack; you hung ‘um both high and took ‘um down when the rain came.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/17/2009 2:15:00 AM
Nostalgia fluttering like "butterflies" from clothes-pins, love this write, Deborah!:) Very creative and sense evoking. I think that laundry hanging outside on a line, smells lovingly of comfort and caring. The last verse made me smile. Very clever, Deborah! Best to you and yours...Mikki
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Date: 4/14/2009 9:04:00 PM
OMG I am flooded with memories. I am about 5 and sitting on my back steps with my mom hanging out the clothes on the line. I'm playin with ants and caterpillars (uck) watching the clothes in the breeze with the blue sky and white fluffy clouds. This is so happy. Clothes on the line, smell of lilacs nearby, hopscotch court on the driveway...I could go on, but it's your poem. So nostalgic, evoking awesome memories. Thanks. Love, shar
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Date: 4/14/2009 6:23:00 PM
I love these nostalgic writes of your, Debbie....it takes me back in time to my mom and Grandmother....I can see those sheets, towels, and undies flapping in the wind!
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Date: 4/14/2009 4:26:00 PM
can hear the pulley wheel whinin' .... cool! Jim
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Date: 4/14/2009 4:26:00 PM
You know the one thing in my life I consider a true blessing was my grandparents - I was raised one generation back - We grew and raised our own food - canned our own jam and made our own quilts - We were a close family when i was young and I'm actually amazed at how much of it I can now remember - My Grandmother had a Ringer Washer and a cloths line. Our T.V. was black and white and life was so simple - Your poem took me to a place I adore - Home - thank you & God Bless, MJ
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