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Lines, Words-And the Flow.

Where we are? State undefined, engulfed in nebulous forms. Clear Chaos veiling vision – the urge to see beyond. Amidst life – unheard, unheralded, unadapted. What are we doing here? Supposedly seriously defining the dreams. Disorderliness maintenance or may be paraphrasing togetherness. Experimenting approaches: didactic, disciplined, distributed. Why are we doing this? Passion ignited urge has become a need. Meaninglessness pinches, thankfully not-numb, 'us'. Individually juggling – existence, expectations, encumbrance. Where from here? Nowhere or the apex. Compromise undoubtedly cannot be the end-word To anywhere – without- mediocrity, mid-life, mannequins. …And so? Bland paper needs meaningful lines. Humane words have to rekindle the flow. The show has begun: destined, determined, devouring.

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Date: 10/2/2008 4:54:00 PM
I like the flow of alliteration in this poem. Your use of figurative language certainly gives the poem a special spark. The message is excellent. The ending lines certainly put the icing on the cake. Great job! ~Joseph
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