Like Chaste Eyes

Chaste eyes trace my limbs, in the deep of woods
swerving like a breeze moist on fields of grass,
His Latin fire, on edge of twilight moods.

Shape of curves fondled like tender morass,
the call of moaning sprawls into full grind
swerving like a breeze moist on fields of grass

Although he’s roamed my shore , gentle and kind
I still pulsate where musk scent trails. Outside,
the call of moaning sprawls into full grind

My fiery sighs reflect a wilder croon
holding breaths captive in a mesh; a glide
of movement’s tempo sing to rising moon

And kindling now our chaste eyes, they abide
love’s virtue wafts from wings of night;
to hold breaths captive in sweet flow, a glide!

Inhabiting one space where gazes meet
Chaste eyes trace my limbs, in deep of woods...
Love’s virtue blazes skin from curl of sheets
His Latin fire, on edge of twilight moods.

The simple times remembered are worthwhile.
Those memories are treasured gifts to keep.
We were innocent and lived without guile.
        

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 Inspiration from Nobel Prize poet, 
Pablo Neruda from Chile. Excerpts from 
his poem 'Ode to Naked Beauty' follows:

Ode To A Naked Beauty

With chaste heart, and pure
eyes
I celebrate you, my beauty,
restraining my blood
so that the line
surges and follows
your contour,
and you bed yourself in my verse,
as in woodland, or wave-spume:
earth's perfume,
sea's music.

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Terzanelle Time for Joseph May
Old poem  Re-submitted     11/8/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Beautiful and passionate Nette...Thank you and Congrats on your win
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Awesome write :) ,Nette, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Poet Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 4:15 AM
Hey where r u?Computer/internet/problem?
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 10:13 AM
nette, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 3:15 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Nette. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 9:36 PM
Wow!Wonderful and beautiful write,Nette.Nice adaptation and great job..Congratulations on well deserved win..Super win..Millions of Huggs...
Ryerson Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Whew!... Ohh my god!... Oh me oh my!...Mercy sakes!... and, and... all that other stuff!...absolutely beautiful, pure and erotic poetry, Nette!...every couple whose relationship has gone a little stale should read this...Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 5:17 PM
wow, this one is HOT, Nette. Love your poem AND the one you chose to emulate. Congats to you!
Guzzi Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 3:12 PM
You can tell..you love..love nette! Congrad's on your win, and such an interesting choice of poet too! Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Beautiful images, as always. Congratulations.
Wright Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 9:47 PM
Great translation and lovely poem! It creates a wonderful ambience...good luck in Joann's contest!!
Devnath  Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 12:52 PM
Superb poem bears a clean depth of love of purity. It's nice my friend. Loved always, bl
Neels Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Nette, what an awesome write, I just love this :) wishing you the best for Joann's contest *hugs* Wilma
Wesley Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 7:29 AM
I like yours better Nette, maybe someone should investigate your poetry and find a new poet laureate!
Poet Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Wow!Amazing poetry here Nette...love this!
A   Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 6:55 PM
nette,,, this is excellent...missing you and the soup.... ..xox~pd
Horne Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 2:40 PM
lovely write, Nette - interesting form too (must try it)
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Expressive and emotive work..Passion penned...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 4:26 AM
My dear Nette,Nette and Nette this is So BEauTiFuL !!!!! - Have a lovely weekend!!!! - oxox // always Anne-Lise :) <3 <3 <3 <3
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Oh Nette, your write is very sensuous! This is a very passionate poem my friend! I love the grandiose meaning behind this romantic piece! I really enjoyed this poem and what it's all about, I visualized my wife within and I was the Latino...burning with fire! Great Work!!
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August 10, 2012 at 7:26 PM
‡ This Is Absolutely Sensual & Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Nette; Wow ... My Luv, Rachel ‡
Long Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Glad to be back.. I have missed my PS friends.. This is beautiful nette! I love it... cory
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