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Light Year Novice

Lost blue star, True to dark heavens, Fallen there.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/9/2024 2:52:00 PM

Paige, this expression is incredibly evocative and filled with longing! It is a heartfelt homage to a star that has tragically descended from the celestial realm, forever lost in the vast abyss of the night sky.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/4/2024 2:09:00 PM

an intriguing, haunting haiku to start the new year off...thanks for your lovely comments on my poetry :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/4/2024 11:04:00 AM

Paige, this is so plaintive, so wistful! Tribute to a fallen star no more seen or enjoyed for its sparkling wonder! Blessings of health and happiness for the 2024 to you.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/3/2024 6:49:00 AM

Sigh, one of those haiku, that makes the readers feel so much truly. Your poetic skills leave me in awe always, how deep your thoughts are and when expressed it truly touched all of us… lost blue star. What an opening line… and that last line hits strong:pleasure reading your work. sending you light always!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2024 7:32:00 PM

Thought-provoking! Happy New Year, Paige!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/2/2024 5:05:00 PM

wow, this was outstanding, Paige. Seems like it's not only a Haiku about a lost blue star that's fallen but perhaps a lost soul true to his dark side has fallen??? Anyway, this is creative...have to fave. Have a great evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 1/2/2024 11:10:00 AM

This one is really deep... thought provoking also, as it could have so many different meanings dear Paige... nicely done...

Karen Jones

Date: 1/1/2024 11:38:00 PM

This is magical makes me wonder.