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Life This dance of death done in the fall! The Sugar Maple bleeds, ground tattooed with leaf imprints, red and brown traces of a onetime life. Nature at its height, a painter’s pallet. Nature dying striking, vibrant. We are like a leaf. We get one life to make radiantly bright. So that our falling is majestic. 10/20/2016

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Date: 9/18/2018 8:07:00 PM
Oh, I love your poem, Sian, and the powerful metaphor of the 'dance of death'. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/18/2018 1:24:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sian.
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:39:00 PM
Dear Janis, beautiful...congrats on your placement in the contest, wonderful life! //love, Anu:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/25/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks, Anu.
Date: 10/22/2016 5:29:00 AM
A well thought out piece - enjoyed this visit! Lovely imagery and leaves you thinking on life and our direction.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/22/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thanks, Anna.
Date: 10/21/2016 7:02:00 AM
Beautiful title and the strikingly poetic last four lines ...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/22/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thanks, Probir.

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