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Let the Sun Wait

I wish the sun doesn’t set, waits for me awhile,
it’s not time yet to go down with the day. 
The sky is not yet suffused with all the color pile,
the wafting lattice of wispy clouds longs to sway. 

It’s not time yet to go down with the day,  
while the horizon still holds the crimson sun.
The wafting lattice of wispy clouds longs to sway 
in the golden gleam, the journey has just begun.    

While the horizon still holds the crimson sun,
the flowers haven’t finished floating their scent 
in the golden gleam, the journey has just begun, 
the tinsels of radiance are still alluringly present. 

The flowers haven’t finished floating their scent
in the sparkling ambiance under twilight sky dome. 
The tinsels of radiance are still alluringly present
at the end of the path where I’ll be going home. 

In the sparkling ambiance under twilight sky dome, 
the sky is not yet suffused with all the color pile. 
at the end of the path where I’ll be going home.
I wish the sun doesn’t set, waits for me awhile.

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August 26, 2022
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Contest : Pantoum-Old Or New
Sponsored by : Joseph May

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Date: 8/31/2022 4:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Subimal! Congratulations!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/31/2022 10:04:00 PM
Thank you, Kim your visit and kind comment that I value so much.
Date: 8/28/2022 9:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win Subimal, Wonderful write
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/31/2022 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph for your kind comment and for the placement.

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