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i want to fly high i wish i could be a bird but i cant do so because god made me a girl they say i cant smile because i am not a boy i want to ask them .. why do they treat me like a toy they say i am a burden and i shouldn't have been born someday i will prove them that all they said was wrong no, i am not a waste so don't treat me like a flawed i can be anything i am the best creation of god if you cant protect m so then you don't have the right to exploit because you will feel ashamed when i will raise my voice you think i am not brave you think i can be hurled but i am not afraid of any pain if i can make a baby enter this world so.. let me live the way i deserve because i am not a curse i am a girl.. i am a pearl

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Date: 6/17/2016 12:04:00 PM
" i am a girl...i am a pearl "...> wonderful rhyming and powerful meaning ! Great ! Congrats !!
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Date: 6/12/2016 10:55:00 PM
a poorva,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/9/2016 5:48:00 AM
hey.welcome to poetry soup..lets two Indians have a fascinating journey of poems together..
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:16:00 PM
- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Apoorva :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:22:00 AM
ha, my 12-year-old has a poem almost like this one, I love this and am giving you a high 5 plus, I'm faving this poem... SKAT
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:22:00 AM
Apoorva, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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