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Let Me Be

Let me be as I choose within reason An hourglass sifts the time of my life I would like my decisions to be mine Is it so much to ask, to retain freedom? The same freedom, nourishes my soul To grow, to give, to share, to love All that makes the time in life fulfilling One dark day, I saw no flowers It seemed the garden had died Restricted by weeds and also neglect All controlled by someone who planted it I’ve seen the freedom in a meadow Flowing freely in the oncoming breeze All the blades of grass in sequence This way, that way, all together free Let me be like that blade of grass Gentle, soft, flexible and free Open as such a meadow can be Heidi Sands 8/8/21

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Date: 8/16/2021 1:51:00 PM
I want to be a blade too... so beautiful... Ann
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:09:00 AM
This speaks of a gentle soul "Let me be like that blade of grass Gentle, soft, flexible and free Open as such a meadow can be" Exquisite.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2021 10:32:00 AM
That is nice to hear Caren. Thank you :)
Date: 8/10/2021 6:54:00 PM
It is not too much to ask, to retain freedom. It is the longing of every human to be free.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2021 7:49:00 PM
True. Thank you Kenneth :)
Date: 8/9/2021 11:06:00 AM
- When we have learned: "To grow, to give, to share, to love" ... we are free ... beautifully written, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2021 11:10:00 AM
Yes. Thank you Anne-Lise :) Hugs
Date: 8/8/2021 4:28:00 PM
such a beautiful poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Ashley :)
Date: 8/8/2021 4:06:00 PM
Ah, Heidi, I enjoy any poem about a meadow, and this is a lovely one. I also loved the theme of freedom. So well-written!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Milton. I am glad to hear you enjoyed it :)
Date: 8/8/2021 4:05:00 PM
Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Heidi. Freedom is paramount to all we do.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2021 4:30:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed it. Yes, it is paramount to all we do. Thank you Vijay. Have a nice evening :)
Date: 8/8/2021 3:45:00 PM
I like. some good visuals.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Mister :)

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