K E E P I N G U P W I T H T H E Dow Joneses

KEEPING UP WITH THE DOW JONESES 

These here are the indisputable facts
I was born on the right side of the tracks
WITH People who only smiled if their stocks or equity increased
If not they wouldn’t have minded becoming deceased

They had big cars, big bucks and big time class
With a million dollar house mortgaged up the a*s
Their children went to private schools in uniforms
With charming and well decorated dorms 

I looked at their faces and wondered why I didn’t fit
That’s when the fire in my belly was originally lit
I had no desire to play with kids from private schools
Nor did I ever agree to obey by their rules

So one day I skipped over steel and these here are the facts
The people I found lived in tents, not even shanties or shacks
But they didn’t have to read Dow Jones in order to smile
And couldn’t care less about having Gucci type style

They smiled at things people ignore like little tykes at play
And somehow or other they AWOKE contented day after day
They had no stocks to watch fretfully fall or RESOUNDINGLY rise
And you could see the easiness in their gleaming eyes

That which I observed in them appealed to me a great deal
The wrong side people taught me how satisfied I could feel
They lived out of back-packs, antique cedar chests and sacks
So if you come a’looking for me I’ll be on the wrong side of the tracks
             © 2011.…Phreepoetree   ~free cee!~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/22/2011 3:10:00 PM
How much do u charge if I steal it for my favorites? ha ha. :)
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Date: 10/22/2011 3:09:00 PM
Hi Jeffry, The reason I like this poem is simple...you seemed so prejudiced towards these folks on the other side of the tracks but you took that emotion and did something positive with it! You explored, tried to place yourself in their shoes, and showed the audience that you were wrong. THEN U JOINED THEM!!! This is poetry with a purpose...it can bring healing and be used in a few modern day scenarios...I REALLY LIKE IT! Gwendolen
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Date: 10/22/2011 7:32:00 AM
It's very interesting tale,jeffry.I enjoyed it this evening.
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:35:00 PM
Awesome!!! This read like a true story...The whole thing rocked!.....X-celent write!
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