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My shoes are the strong silent type in that they rarely throw fits about the weather as flip-flops do nor demand tit-for-tat consideration when worn together with socks. It should come as little surprise then that they’re white and grey, underemployed running shoes, meaning long strolls at sunrise are just what they sound like: footsteps devoid the prerequisite urgency to shift directions as deemed necessary by either myself or my feet when adrift through trance-like stables of the butterfly where train engineers mimic the station of glacier-laced shoe-string transformation.

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Date: 3/14/2017 9:53:00 AM
A nice sonnet, Phillip:)
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Date: 3/11/2017 3:16:00 PM
Phillip...your gift of fluidity is fantastic! Your life allegorical summation...the metaphors...and lines like: "...underemployed running shoes..." are all perfectly woven and convey so very much!! Well done my friend! Blessings to you!! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/9/2017 5:21:00 PM
I like this!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 3/11/2017 2:56:00 PM
Gracias, Maureen :)
Date: 3/8/2017 1:05:00 AM
Heh :) The poems we can write about shoes! Don't get me started on mine.... And oh yeah, not about shoes of course, but still.
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 3/11/2017 2:55:00 PM
Of course it's about shoes! Or maybe it wasn't :)

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