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Running wild Through beds of rocks and stones His voice echoes... 'Neath the mountain tops Years gone by Slimmed thin; his narrow bones His arms, still trickling slowly downstream Of man-stocked No more reproduction Like a blood transfusion...the trout swims Just like that Outliving you and I One day, Old Man River...will be gone Images in Parallel Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May 2/15/2021

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Date: 2/16/2021 7:37:00 PM
Hello Charles … if we observe closely, over the years changes occur and that affects everything around us, especially clearing of forest - thank you charles - Lindsay
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Date: 2/16/2021 9:04:00 AM
Charlie, wonderful write for the contest, hope to see it on the winning list _Constance
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Date: 2/16/2021 5:11:00 AM
Lets hope not. I do love rivers ands streams. One river I admire is the one that cut the Grand Canyon. Now that's a river. Good one my friend. God Bless, JB
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/16/2021 5:18:00 AM
Unfortunately, Judy... All good things eventually come to an end. Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~Charlie
Date: 2/16/2021 4:50:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest.
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Date: 2/16/2021 5:19:00 AM
Your most welcome, Beata. Your poem was well deserved... Blessings
Date: 2/15/2021 9:18:00 PM
Your imagery made me feel I was that trout, feeling cool and safe for now anyway.
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Date: 2/16/2021 5:20:00 AM
LOL-swim little fishy :) Thanks for reading, Caren :)

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