Jules - Tet

Jules Buoyant Inspired Sylph in his eyes Lost in the fog where restive hearts reside Will she surrender her passionate flame? It's all he wants To be named Whispered Craved.

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2019 4:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:33:00 PM

ooh love that last part: to be named, whispered, craved! Congrats on the win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Robin :) - Sun :)

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 7:08:00 AM

Wonderful write, Robin. Love the line "Lost in fog where restive hearts reside" Congratulations on your top win. Charlie