Jules - Tet

Jules
Buoyant
Inspired
Sylph in his eyes
Lost in the fog where restive hearts reside
Will she surrender her passionate flame?
It's all he wants
To be named
Whispered
Craved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/7/2019 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve
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Date: 5/4/2019 2:33:00 PM
ooh love that last part: to be named, whispered, craved! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/4/2019 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Robin :) - Sun :)
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Date: 5/4/2019 7:08:00 AM
Wonderful write, Robin. Love the line "Lost in fog where restive hearts reside" Congratulations on your top win. Charlie
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