Jade

A jade green eye winks... A tear spills down a soft cheek. Inspired by Brian Strand

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/5/2010 10:10:00 PM

Dear Doris, I have read all 4 of YOUR Imagism POEMS I had different feelings for each Write this one reminds me of LENORE when she Winked to me with HER " jade green eyes " I wish YOU the very Best Luck ( I Don't Think YOU need any Luck ) in Brian's Contest YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/5/2010 7:27:00 PM

jade is a very pretty name & color. beautiful write.crying can be so wonderful in ways such as the words you wrote. and thank you for commenting on my poetry. -Always Lynette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/5/2010 7:50:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Doris. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/5/2010 5:13:00 AM

A somewhat sad but lovely picture, Doris! Great as entry for the contest...Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/4/2010 3:21:00 PM

This one leaves several opening that I could think of to fill in the blank. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara