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When I was a child, outside of Christmas, Halloween was my favorite time of year. I loved to make homemade costumes from old rags, to wear trick-or-treating in the neighborhood. And yet, for me, the most fun was carving the scariest pumpkin my mind could conceive. It was one of the only times I was allowed to wield a knife; and I reveled in it, turning carving pumpkins into an art. Dad would drive me to a farmer's pumpkin patch and let me pick out my favorite orange canvas; to showcase my artistic talents. I'd start by cutting into the top of the pumpkin, scalping it to gain access to its skull. And with my hands, I'd scoop out its brains, which felt mushy, gooey, slimly, and gross; as I removed it to make my Jack-o'-lantern. Then, with an eye for the hideous, I'd prepare to carve. Sculpting its grotesque features, I'd start by gouging out its eyes, shaping a deformed noise, and cutting a toothy grimacing smile. When finished, I'd proudly present my monstrosity to Mom; who'd light a candle and stick it inside my gargoyle, then she'd set it on our stoop to guard us against any evil demons that may be skulking around on this All Hallows' Eve.

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Date: 9/5/2022 10:00:00 AM
Brought back many memories, but especially of making a homemade costume, because we couldn't afford a store-bought one. Halloween was often a bitter cold, rainy or snowy evening, but we went trick-or-treating and often came home wet and miserably with little to show for it. We were a poor community!
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Date: 9/5/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, as I've indicated before, we share a common thread in our upbringing, have a good day my friend, Emile.

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