Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

Iris

To me, yea, Iris is like bleu
The scent of yours all imbued
Behold your face all-rich, 
When I close my eyes bewitched

Wordsworth's daffodils to me, 
Membrane of the eyes of glee, 
That gives light to me in turn, 
Light that misleads the morn.

You are the genus iris, 
With sword-shaped leaves, 
Showy colored flowers, 
Displaying rainbow colors.

Your eyes green and deep, 
Deeper than the depth, 
Stilled waters at even, 
Eyes, break of the day, enliven.

I see a heart full of love, 
With the gentleness of a dove.
Feel, in her eyes, March, 
September in her heart.

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October 8, 2014  (A Repost)
Form: Rhyme
Dr. Ram Mehta
Contest: The sweetest touches of verse by Gautami Phookan
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August 31, 2014
Form: Rhyme (Song)
Third Place win
Contest: Song:Craig Cornish

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Kelly Deschler October 17, 2014 at 1:06 AM I loved the beautiful imagery that just flows through these tender words. Congrats on your win, Dr. Ram. Very nicely done!

Gautami Phookan October 14, 2014 at 3:13 AM A very endearing piece from you Dr Ram and beautiful verse. I loved it and so true 'September in her heart!' Many Congrats on your win. Regards

Maurice Yvonne October 13, 2014 at 1:15 PM What an excellent poem. Congratulations Dr. Mehta.

Jan Allison October 13, 2014 at 12:39 PM beautifully penned Dr Mehta many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode October 13, 2014 at 11:33 AM Congrats on your worthy win Dr.

Carrie Richards September 2, 2014 at 3:54 PM "Membrane of the eyes of glee"......oh my.....that is my favorite line in this delightful poem set to music!! Nicely done, Dr. Ram!

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2014 at 3:20 PM Beautiful win, Dr. Ram. Congratulations and a unique poem!

Hija De La Luna September 2, 2014 at 10:16 AM Congrats, Dr. Ram! this is wonderful!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 2, 2014 at 7:36 AM And back again with congrats on ur winning awesome lyric Dr Ram!

Carolyn Devonshire September 1, 2014 at 7:39 PM Very beautiful, Dr. Ram. I loved the entire poem, especially the lines: "Wordsworth's daffodils to me, Membrane of the eyes of glee, That gives light to me in turn" Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Brenda Meier-Hans September 1, 2014 at 6:39 PM Congratulations on your win Dr Mehta. very beautiful poem.

Debbie Guzzi September 1, 2014 at 6:09 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Maurice Yvonne September 1, 2014 at 4:09 PM congratulations Dr. Mehta on you well deserved win.

Nette Onclaud September 1, 2014 at 5:39 AM i must say this is a phenomenal work filled with gentle expressions, dr.ram.. huggs

Verlena S. Walker August 31, 2014 at 11:04 PM Done well Dr. Mehta for September... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2014 at 3:12 PM this is so beautiful. Is it for Craig's contest? REally sweet.

Liam Mcdaid August 31, 2014 at 10:28 AM very beautifully painted piece loved the visions drawn

Eileen Manassian August 31, 2014 at 7:30 AM Lovely and sweet, Dr Ram. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2014 at 5:34 AM Brilliant write Dr Ram! Great rhyming!

Demetrios Trifiatis August 31, 2014 at 4:53 AM IRIS, the goddess of the rainbow and massager of the Gods in Greek mythology would certainly be delighted by your poem Dr. Ram, as in it she would have seen her beauty reflected!

Maurice Yvonne August 31, 2014 at 2:59 AM As always a superb write Dr. Metha. I really enjoy the sound of this one. Great imagery. Thank You.