Invasive

Light comes... ever invading Brilliant, iridescent Illuminating all paths Glows in deepest darkness; can not be hid! ~*~ Note: For Rick Praise's Contest - Praise Pariku

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Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2013 3:32:00 PM

so glad to see this was a winner, my friend. Hope you are both well and having a great week xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Annalise in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 1/9/2011 1:45:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on winning a deserving top spot on this contest and many thanks to you for my poem's placement among the winners in your contest. (^_^) Noel.

John Freeman

Date: 1/7/2011 2:52:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your poem's honorable fourth place win. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2011 12:01:00 AM

Congrats Audrey on your well deserved win and thanks for your inspiring words at my work.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2011 8:45:00 PM

clap, clap! you're truly a winner..:)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/6/2011 7:53:00 PM

Awesome Audrey.Many congratulations for this super success.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2011 4:41:00 PM

That is correct that Light cannot be hidden..Congrats..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2011 3:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Audrey! Just as beautiful as yourself !! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2011 3:19:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry and super title my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Rick

Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in rick's contest, with this outstanding poem~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2011 1:34:00 PM

wonderful, Audrey. Glad to see you place high in the contest!! Congratulations, Luv, andrea

Rick Parise

Date: 1/6/2011 1:30:00 PM

The light shall always conquer !!!!~ simply beautiful~A path of eternity!!!!~congrats on your 4th place win in my contest!!!!~Rick/////////God bless

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2010 7:01:00 AM

Hey, I think this one will do really well in that contest.Wonderful, Audrey.

Susan Palli

Date: 12/19/2010 12:54:00 AM

Loved it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/18/2010 10:36:00 AM

Such a spiritually uplifting poem, Audrey! Rick is sure to like this one as much as I do. Love, Carolyn