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Where dreams had tryouts… and many got benched,

My son’s growth in his youthful years!

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As a kid, I had a brilliant plan— Become a dentist! Be The Man! White coat, big bucks, drills that whir... Then I saw my cousin’s clinic—Brrr! The smell alone could curl your soul, I noped right out, no toothy goal. Next up: Baseball! I had the swing! A Little League semi-almost-king. Parents cheered like I was Babe, Though I mostly warmed the bench in shade. Scouts? None came. (Shocking, I know.) So I let that dream... quietly go. Then hoop dreams rose in high school halls— I could dribble, pass, and almost ball. Varsity? I gave it a shot, But turns out, talent—I had not. Coach picked others, and I stayed sane, Dodged early fame, and homework pain. At last, I thought, “Let’s try the brain!” Books, not balls, would be my lane. Still played for fun, just not the pros, (Except in dreams, where anything goes). Years rolled on, life found its groove, My hands got steady, found their move. Not on a bat, nor tossing a ball— But fixing bones from big to small. From fractured dreams to fractured hips, I made my peace with life’s quick flips. An orthopedic doc I came to be— Not rich from teeth, but hey—it’s dad’s son!

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Date: 4/11/2025 12:02:00 AM
I was thinking it was about you but then realized this was your son. This is a really sweet portrayal of looking at his changing dreams through your eyes.
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Date: 4/10/2025 11:22:00 PM
Children, when they are young, will be having several dreams and they will experiment with life, choosing many options. When young, life is an experiment and it should be so. However he finally chose to become a doctor... an Orthopedic surgeon. You can be proud of him. My second son wanted to become an ortho surgeon, but finally he ended up in Paediatrics.
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Date: 4/8/2025 10:46:00 AM
- There is a lot between dream and reality, especially when you are young :) - But an important profession he chose, Jay - I'm sure your were proud of your son:) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2025 11:03:00 AM
"but hey—it’s me" ... I thought it was your son... I was unsure of the ending line :)
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Jay Narain
Date: 4/8/2025 10:52:00 AM
ANNE, This poem is about my son.

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