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In and Out of Love

birds gather and sing they’re lined outside my window as I awaken to the touch of sun and a faded dream I cover my head with a pillow a soothsayer says a new life I wish for a miracle now that my friend and I no longer see each other and the forecast calls for rain I look for an answer but it’s not the answer I want I call some old friends that will have to do for now a story lingers in my heart it longs to be told and told again I’ll order an iced tea and flirt with a waitress in a diner before I put a dollar bill or two in the palm of her hand I’ll drive toward sunrise and drive as the morning stirs office buildings will cast shadows as I take the one-ways in and out of the downtown I’ll turn off the radio and listen to echoes of my exuberant youth when packs of boys and packs of girls drove the streets back and forth and shouted to each other through open windows— we called it cruising

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Date: 9/30/2024 6:12:00 AM
Smooth ~ well penned
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Date: 7/18/2024 9:07:00 PM
Nostalgic... makes the reader think of forgotten memories and loves. Well written. Thanks for the visit.
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Date: 7/18/2024 5:21:00 AM
You take a sad situation and insert a wonderful humanity into it. Pain is a catalyst for beauty.
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Date: 7/9/2024 9:48:00 AM
was this all about road tripping, mike? your piece has that fluent , kinetic swing-- very nicely written!
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Date: 7/6/2024 6:21:00 PM
Oh dang is the relationship off? I am not always sure what's up with you but I sure love how you insert nostalgia into your poems
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Date: 7/5/2024 10:19:00 AM
Those were the good old days-cruising. Maybe it comes to mind with a hidden message, are you ready to meet someone new? I enjoy this poem
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