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In A Nude Mood Of Bittersweet Interlude


Romanticism descends an unbridled staircase

stripped bare and unleashed,

passion in supple nudity

tiptoes down my spine,

burning in its yearning, softly unveiled …

tingling every naked nerve with a sudden surge

of electric longing and unmasked pulses of pang and pleasure.




October 11, 2019



Contest: Nude - Descending A Staircase
Sponsor: John Lawless





*romanticism: romantic spirit or tendency*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/3/2019 7:11:00 AM
Oh dear sissy a nude mood? did we switch places are you the insane one now and I am sane?nope I can't do it I wanna be the one in a nude mood! Lmao! I pictured you in public and just out the blue start disrobing it would be exactly what s insane sibling would do! Hahaha! Sissy don't make me chase behind you picking up your clothes as I try to cover you back up! That's the whole fun part insanity lol! Beautiful write my dear I did acutely picture that when I first read the title! Lmao!Love ya!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:12:00 AM
I'm telling bro bro! Your gonna be in trouble!;) hahaha! Treehouse almost complete dear sister!;)
Date: 10/17/2019 10:52:00 AM
I have no words to do this justice—all satin and lace—exquisite! That title is just so GREAT—it is its own poem-it is like the face of a goddess and the poem well the rest of her :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/27/2019 8:22:00 PM
Dearest P.S., I relish the beauty of your inspiring comments. It is always such a great honor when your lovely thoughts and presence graces one of my poems. You are as uplifting as you are talented, dear poetess, your generous heart shines. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/15/2019 10:27:00 AM
My friend, sorry for my being so late to find this beautiful gem. Your verses always awe me and this one with its sensual imagery, longing revealed and clear expression of romance and deep yearning has given me an idea to start a poem. That inspiration is exactly what poetry should gift when read by a fellow poet! A true gem and a fav too..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/27/2019 8:17:00 PM
My dear friend, you always see and feel the heart and soul of my poetry, and your beautiful perception here is no exception. I am heartened by your appreciation and thrilled to know that I've offered your brilliant poetic creativity a spark of artistic inspiration. Thank you, Robert, for your wonderful and treasured friendship.. please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/14/2019 1:43:00 PM
You're a master of headlines, Susan. Even if there weren't all those ecstatic flashes and pulses after it, I'd still get my share of pang and pleasure. Who wouldn't?) GL in the contest.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 6:05:00 PM
Indeed, I do favor a catchy title for sure, Kurt, and I’m so pleased that it caught the attention of your imagination as well. It’s wonderful when you share your precious thoughts with me, thank you my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/14/2019 1:09:00 PM
Hi Susan, I hope you win this one. It's going into my Faves. Best, Panagiota
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for gracing my poem with your wonderful thoughts and with the honor of you fave, Panagiota. Both your gracious visit and heartwarming kindness are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/13/2019 10:11:00 AM
Hey! Suzie Que...an erotic escalator I see...my sissy never missy lol...keep your eye out for puff puff part 2...tomorrow some time...later Illum...bro bro :o)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 11/4/2019 4:39:00 PM
Whats a bro bro to do?...crazy sissys, giving me the dizzies lol...but still love you both...ta ta from your loving brah :O)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:15:00 AM
Bro bro sissy is in a nude mood tell nope she can't do it!;) lol!;) I told her I read the title and instantly thought of her running naked down the street with me chasing her with her clothes! Lol see that's what this insane sister would do!;) love you two!;)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:34:00 AM
Lol! Bro Bro, you never fail to bring me a smile.. I feel I've walked a fine line (or an erotic escalator.. haha!) with this romantic piece about passionate emotional reverie. I will keep an eye out for Puff Puff part 2.. looking forward to it, my fav bro. Love, light and sanity.. your sane sis <3
Date: 10/12/2019 8:43:00 PM
Very sensual! Nicely done!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! Your visits are always a delight. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 10/12/2019 9:50:00 AM
great penning Susan, just enough imagery through your words to leave the reader open their imagination....creative and wonderful poem ...hopefully that staircase can withstand the heat of those sparks flying...hugs
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra, for your precious thoughts and gracious visit. I'm so pleased to know that you enjoyed my poem, I feel like the imagery was on the edge with this romantic piece about passionate emotional reverie. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/11/2019 7:12:00 PM
Hope your nude dude is up for an interlude. If not, how rude! Seriously though this titillates in an acceptable way. I vision his virgin bride descending the staircase (or ascending?) on honeymoon. Have a nice weekend Suze
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/11/2019 9:07:00 PM
Lol! But your shallow charm is so very endearing :))
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Son of Spock
Date: 10/11/2019 8:57:00 PM
I warned you I wasn't very deep :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/11/2019 7:46:00 PM
Lol! Honeymoon.. not, but I like your take on it. This poem is about the realization of bittersweet emotions, but maybe my imagery missed the mark, SOS. Sometimes the naked truth of passionate emotions (both positive and negative) can titillate and agitate when one reminisces and realizes the ramifications of what’s been gained and/or lost. Your visit and sexy interpretation is appreciated, my friend. Have a nice weekend as well, my friend.. ~Suze
Date: 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM
- WoooW, Susan ... and I was afraid that my suggestion "was a bit on edge" ... :) - Love it :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for both your kind visit and lovely comment. I feel I've walked a fine line with this romantic piece about passionate emotional reverie. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan