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In a Nude Mood of Bittersweet Interlude

Romanticism descends an unbridled staircase bittersweet; stripped bare and unleashed passion in supple nudity sashays down my spine a ginned up shimmy and sway yearn tingling every naked nerve with a sudden surge of electric longing and unmasked pulses of pang and pleasure Susan Ashley October 11, 2019 *romanticism: romantic spirit or tendency*

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Nature Boy
Date: 4/15/2021 9:41:00 AM
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What a wonderful piece. Sensual words that allows the mind to visualize and wander very nice. :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/15/2021 10:38:00 AM
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I am delighted to receive your kind visit and gracious comments, Nature Boy. That you wandered amidst these sensual words to linger within the imagery of my poem is gratifying to know.. Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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John Watt
Date: 3/10/2020 11:26:00 PM
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Did the room just get warm, or what? Your understated passion is a sensory garden of delight. "electric longing and unmasked pulses of pang and pleasure", it IS getting warm in here! Fully clothed poetic hugs, my friend! ~ John
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/12/2020 9:01:00 PM
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Lol! John, your last line; 'Fully clothed poetry hugs' got a round of giggles and the rest of your lovely comments brought a bouquet of smiles on the evening of a long busy day. I appreciate your wonderful humor and your beautiful thoughts, my friend. Thank you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/8/2020 9:45:00 AM
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Love making is such a gift. I enjoyed this interlude. ;0)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/8/2020 8:33:00 PM
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Your gracious visit is wonderful to receive, Richard, as are your beautiful comments. Thank you, both are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2020 3:33:00 PM
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Sensual and passionate, to say the least, Susan. A momentary product of fantasy. Definitely tingles the imagination! ~ Hope you're not working too hard:) Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/23/2020 7:38:00 PM
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Hello, my dear friend! I have missed you and your amazing poetry so much. I'm trying to eke out some spare time to be active and enjoy your lovely works of art again. That my poem tingled the imagination is a fulfillment of my intention :) Paul, your presence here is ever so appreciated and your comments are a joy to receive. Thank you. My very warmest wishes and hugs to you always.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2020 10:47:00 PM
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supple nudity/tingling every naked nerve/unmasked pulses of pang and pleasure. — nice imagery, Susan!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/21/2020 10:11:00 PM
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Thank you, Kim, for your return visit and for your uplifting appreciation. It inspires me to know that a poetess of your high caliber enjoys my imagery. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2020 7:19:00 AM
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Love this: tingling every naked nerve with a sudden surge...for sure when we bare ourselves
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/12/2020 7:38:00 PM
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Indeed, Kim, taking a chance on bearing ourselves can bring pleasure or pain.. usually a bittersweet blend of both.. feelings that fuel what poems are made of. I’m so glad you loved that line. Reading your poetry inspires my own self-expression, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/24/2019 6:53:00 PM
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You are enjoying this moment way too much...good for you. Good luck in the contest.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/15/2019 8:52:00 AM
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Lol.. I did enjoy playing with the imagery for this one, M. L., but sometimes the naked truth of passionate emotions (both positive and negative) can bring pleasure and/or pain when one reminisces and realizes the ramifications of what’s been gained and/or lost. Ah, such is life.. I feel we've all been there at some point or another. Please accept my apologies for such a late reply. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:11:00 AM
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Oh dear sissy a nude mood? did we switch places are you the insane one now and I am sane?nope I can't do it I wanna be the one in a nude mood! Lmao! I pictured you in public and just out the blue start disrobing it would be exactly what s insane sibling would do! Hahaha! Sissy don't make me chase behind you picking up your clothes as I try to cover you back up! That's the whole fun part insanity lol! Beautiful write my dear I did acutely picture that when I first read the title! Lmao!Love ya!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/15/2019 9:02:00 AM
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Ah, my twin sis, so who's the crazy insane sissy now?! You've uncovered my scheme to switch places with you, (that's insanity in itself.. haha!), if only for the few moments in this poem..lol! You're always in a nude mood, my wonderful sis, and me and bro wouldn't want it any other way! Lol! Thanks for being willing to chase me with my clothes though.. two insane sissies running down the street.. lol! Ohhh, poor bro bro! My apologies for my late reply.. I just haven't been able to be here. Looking forward to moving back into the remodeled treehouse soon :)) Love and hugs to you dear sis :))
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:12:00 AM
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I'm telling bro bro! Your gonna be in trouble!;) hahaha! Treehouse almost complete dear sister!;)
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/17/2019 10:52:00 AM
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I have no words to do this justice—all satin and lace—exquisite! That title is just so GREAT—it is its own poem-it is like the face of a goddess and the poem well the rest of her :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/27/2019 8:22:00 PM
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Dearest P.S., I relish the beauty of your inspiring comments. It is always such a great honor when your lovely thoughts and presence graces one of my poems. You are as uplifting as you are talented, dear poetess, your generous heart shines. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/15/2019 10:27:00 AM
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My friend, sorry for my being so late to find this beautiful gem. Your verses always awe me and this one with its sensual imagery, longing revealed and clear expression of romance and deep yearning has given me an idea to start a poem. That inspiration is exactly what poetry should gift when read by a fellow poet! A true gem and a fav too..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/27/2019 8:17:00 PM
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My dear friend, you always see and feel the heart and soul of my poetry, and your beautiful perception here is no exception. I am heartened by your appreciation and thrilled to know that I've offered your brilliant poetic creativity a spark of artistic inspiration. Thank you, Robert, for your wonderful and treasured friendship.. please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/14/2019 1:43:00 PM
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You're a master of headlines, Susan. Even if there weren't all those ecstatic flashes and pulses after it, I'd still get my share of pang and pleasure. Who wouldn't?) GL in the contest.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 6:05:00 PM
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Indeed, I do favor a catchy title for sure, Kurt, and I’m so pleased that it caught the attention of your imagination as well. It’s wonderful when you share your precious thoughts with me, thank you my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/14/2019 1:09:00 PM
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Hi Susan, I hope you win this one. It's going into my Faves. Best, Panagiota
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 6:07:00 PM
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Thank you for gracing my poem with your wonderful thoughts and with the honor of you fave, Panagiota. Both your gracious visit and heartwarming kindness are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/13/2019 10:11:00 AM
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Hey! Suzie Que...an erotic escalator I see...my sissy never missy lol...keep your eye out for puff puff part 2...tomorrow some time...later Illum...bro bro :o)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/7/2020 9:22:00 PM
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Lol! I love my crazy fam! :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 11/4/2019 4:39:00 PM
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Whats a bro bro to do?...crazy sissys, giving me the dizzies lol...but still love you both...ta ta from your loving brah :O)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:15:00 AM
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Bro bro sissy is in a nude mood tell nope she can't do it!;) lol!;) I told her I read the title and instantly thought of her running naked down the street with me chasing her with her clothes! Lol see that's what this insane sister would do!;) love you two!;)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:34:00 AM
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Lol! Bro Bro, you never fail to bring me a smile.. I feel I've walked a fine line (or an erotic escalator.. haha!) with this romantic piece about passionate emotional reverie. I will keep an eye out for Puff Puff part 2.. looking forward to it, my fav bro. Love, light and sanity.. your sane sis <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2019 8:43:00 PM
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Very sensual! Nicely done!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:30:00 AM
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Thank you, Kim! Your visits are always a delight. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/12/2019 9:50:00 AM
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great penning Susan, just enough imagery through your words to leave the reader open their imagination....creative and wonderful poem ...hopefully that staircase can withstand the heat of those sparks flying...hugs
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:29:00 AM
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Thank you, Sandra, for your precious thoughts and gracious visit. I'm so pleased to know that you enjoyed my poem, I feel like the imagery was on the edge with this romantic piece about passionate emotional reverie. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM
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- WoooW, Susan ... and I was afraid that my suggestion "was a bit on edge" ... :) - Love it :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2019 9:27:00 AM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise, for both your kind visit and lovely comment. I feel I've walked a fine line with this romantic piece about passionate emotional reverie. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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