Immersed Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

IMMERSED
so fascinating
 I recognise
a participant
existence
 engaged
&critically
alert
& bewitched
 I love
hearing
the torrents
 of sound
this sensorium
 throbbing
 in an array
of art
 inundated
by light
so
alluringly
 mystical

experienced
in this way,
  formal terms
sensation
& consciousness
fused
freestanding
yet
cascading
merged
in a detonation
of colour
 saturated
images
of
surreal
dimension
both
spiritual both
&sensual drama
visual
 ebbs &flows
to inaugurate
sacrosanct
rituals
in
liberation
of the eye

fantasy
in
experience in
echo
under
immersive
 happenings
 dissolved into
 impressions

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