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6/22/2024 for Sartorial Self Portrait Poetry Contest sponsored by Jaymee Thomas

I'm just an old-fashioned, flannel lumberjack shirt. My father was some overalls, a farmer of dirt. I'm a worn out and holey pair of cotton socks, An unwanted sweater, packed away in a box. My son's a fancy ascot living in New York City. He can't be cut from the same cloth, he's too pretty - A button down shirt, a jacket of fine leather, A whole different sort of men's wear, altogether. I'm aged pair of wing-tips, no longer employed,  Split along the sides, by overwork, nearly destroyed, Living in the shiny black dress shoe memories of Backless gowns, diamonds, stilettos and satin gloves.   I'm a quiet and unassuming pair of jeans, A t-shirt with a picture of natural scenes, A pair of rubber sandals, and a worn out straw hat, A beachcomber, escaping the race of the rat. I'm shorts on the way to the laundry in a sack, An old hat that's traveled around the world and back. Though I may have a loose thread that needs a snip, Still, this hat gives life an appreciative tip.  

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Date: 7/21/2024 9:29:00 PM
This is a portrait of a sensible & responsible person. Congratulations dear poet. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/20/2024 7:44:00 AM
Oh how delightful and unassuming! You're a good one David! I feel I know you much better now and I'm proud to call you neighbor! Congrats on your.(..dag nabbit!!!) Second place win!! Your first place in our hearts! Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/21/2024 8:53:00 AM
Hehe...
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David Crandall
Date: 7/20/2024 1:04:00 PM
haha, I just got your reference - second place LOL
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David Crandall
Date: 7/20/2024 9:16:00 AM
Aw, thanks neighbor Crystol!
Date: 7/20/2024 6:51:00 AM
David - I fell in love with this during the second stanza. Such an incredibly skilled use of language and metaphor to describe your family and yourself. Very, very well done. Congratulations on second place!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/20/2024 9:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Jaymee! Such kind words. Great contest idea! It was fun to write.

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