Igor the Ogre

humans spotted, Igor hides ‘neath his bridge with watchful eyes, the bridge sees them pass “It’s safe,” she murmurs to Igor leaving the bridge’s safe retreat Igor knows his foes will be heading back “May I?” he asks the might oak “Let my branches carry you to safety,” the centuries-old oak responds, “I am strong; I will not break. Let my manly arms surround you.” torch lights borne by villagers approach again but the oak protects Igor, swinging its arms in the wind making it too dangerous for them to find Igor hidden he remains in this shaky loft caressing the oak’s arms in gratitude until the bridge whispers, “It’s safe to return home.” villagers' lights fade in the distance as Igor regrets being born an ogre with only a tree and a bridge to love
For the Fairy Tales Contest *Personification in the tree and the bridge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Eastman Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on the win. A lonely but interesting ogre poem.
Squyres Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 10:03 AM
Poor Igor !! Even Ogres need love and seems to have found it. How dejected yet loved is he !! Congrats on your Win !!
Brown Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carolyn. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 2:26 AM
Carolyn, congrats on your win, loved this ..David
Hunter Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 7:04 PM
Great work...you are an amazing storyteller. I really enjoyed it! Congrats on the win!
Austin Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:39 AM
A Frankensteinian masterpiece. I can see that Ogre hiding under the bridge, so ugly, so lonely. LOve, daver
Horsman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 10:20 AM
my favourite tree, my favourite poet with a wonderful poem, what more could i ask for?
Guzzi Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 8:15 PM
Very nice carolyn!! Leaves one wanting more! Is the bridge a boy or a girl? [I think you want a [mighty oak] line 6..ohhh this just begs for pictures!! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Your free verse writing is quite unique Carolyn, very creative and imaginative. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Creative and great imagination..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It is sure to be a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Grisetti Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 4:11 PM
A sad ending, but a fantastic story poem.
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Beautiful written dear Carolyn, I always look forward to read your poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Carolyn, superb,good luck..,David
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