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Ignis Fatuus

Bright rays now beam with hope’s sweet smile midst lurking storm raring to reign to cheer my soul with truth worthwhile… Bright rays now beam with hope’s sweet smile on vain heart’s ignus fatuus* style… God’s light** I seek for faith’s blest gain bright rays now beam with hope’s sweet smile midst lurking storm raring to reign. *a deceptive goal or hope ** John 3:21 But he that doeth truth cometh to the light, that his deeds may be made manifest, that they are wrought in God. October 30, 2020 1st place, "Pick-A-Title, Vol 24 - Triolet" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 11/12/2020.

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Date: 11/13/2020 1:37:00 PM
Faith, hope and positivity are never far away from your thoughts, Beata! Congratulation son placing first. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/13/2020 11:47:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant triolet, Beata:-)
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Date: 11/13/2020 7:05:00 AM
Excellent WINNING triolet--great message, Beata. Janice
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Date: 11/13/2020 6:28:00 AM
I like the scripture chosen. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 11/13/2020 2:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 10:05:00 PM
I love your theme of hope in the midst of the lurking storm. Well done Beata, and congratulations on your win ~ John
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Beata , on the win!
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Date: 11/12/2020 5:38:00 PM
Nicely penned Beata! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/12/2020 3:13:00 PM
Hi Beats, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/2/2020 5:37:00 PM
ohh, well done, beata...mine is not as good as this, methinks...blessed be!...huggs
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Date: 10/30/2020 9:03:00 AM
You have stated it so well Beata - hope is precious life. We are so blessed that hope is not "a deceptive goal." As always a beautiful, hopeful, up-lifting poem. Best wishes for the contest.
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