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If Your Foot Was In My Shoe

Torn up inside, but no one sees, Hurt, I'm crying on my knees. Sick of fighting, day in and out. Questioning why, having doubt. So if your foot was in my shoe, Just what is it you would do? With all the turmoil I've had to face, Would you stand up and take my place?

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Date: 11/28/2015 3:21:00 AM
Thank you all for taking the time to comment on my poem. I have troubles getting around on here and apologize for the late reply. xoxo J
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Date: 4/23/2014 6:41:00 AM
Short and simply stunning! Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:04:00 PM
A big question,simply said. Congrats Jamie ......Seren
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:34:00 PM
Hi Jamie, Loved how you extracted this one away. Congratulations, this is a great win, for such a painful and realistic theme, when writing about this topic, In which phantom's around Abused Women. Have a nice day:) ~LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Jan
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Date: 4/21/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thank you for entering the contest, Jamie and congratulations on your placement. A very powerful, yet simple poem that packs a punch. Sometimes, I think, simplicity, with a focused and powerful voice is the best way to make your point. You did that in this poem. Well done.
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Date: 4/21/2014 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on this win Jamie... Love how you said what said! Verlena
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