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If Only Trees Could Talk

If Only Trees Could Talk By Dane Smith-Johnsen If only trees could talk there'd be so many things to learn. Old tales we'd hear of sweethearts that beneath their shade had kissed. Oh, lovely sights of nature that they saw before their fall. We'd hear of nearby habitats where snakes and possums hissed. We'd know how careless ravaging harms: Deer. Baboons. Raccoons. The Elephants, gazelles, and mice would seek the trees’ advice. And bears that sleep in wintertime could hear about the cold. Listening to great wisdom from the trees would be quite nice! And if the tree was old enough or passed along life's tales, Perhaps we'd see another view of slaves in history. The trees with years of wisdom could upon us shed some light. Then, man's impact upon the earth would not be mystery. Take Joseph serving Potiphar accused; that changed his life. The king could ask a nearby tree and behead the lying wife. Let's go a little further back, the serpent's words to Eve. He, twisting truth among the leaves, Eve might not have believed. If only trees could talk, we might protect them differently. Replenishing along the way, learned wisdom as our mark. Would we embrace the kindness every living thing deserves? Or would we cut our name into its life beneath tree's bark?

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Date: 2/2/2010 10:42:00 AM
What a fantastic take on trees. Much has been written about them, but your vision is powerful in the question "what if." Imagine the entire history of an area stored in the roots, ignored by man,because we fail to listen to the trees. You are a talented poet. Your pen flows forth the lifeblood of great poetry. Mac
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Date: 9/9/2009 4:55:00 PM
I am glad a few trees can't talk;-) On my poem steel challenge, it is about winning the steel challenge match, My husband actually won, I wrote it for him, the winners names are printed in red. I should've just let you wonder. :)
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Date: 9/9/2009 12:22:00 PM
Nicely done, Dane Ann! Lovely! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/9/2009 11:44:00 AM
Wonderful poem Dane Ann, love the imagery. I like to sit and listen to the trees as the wind rustles them...Raul
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Date: 9/9/2009 10:13:00 AM
Amazing simply amazing Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2009 9:20:00 AM
Superb rhyming piece , DAS-J . Our dog has a fav tree , whom he salutes with his left leg . Now the bark is worse than the bite .....
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Date: 9/9/2009 9:14:00 AM
Thanks for the links Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/9/2009 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful piece...I'm in awe.. Carolyns right..the last line is something special. BG
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Date: 9/9/2009 8:47:00 AM
Magnificent write, Dane, filled with wisdom and love for nature. The life-giving trees that provide shade and add oxygen to our atmosphere have been recklessly destroyed for years and I fear for mankind's future -- perhaps on a barren planet where all life forms would surely perish. What an amazing poem! That last line cuts like a knife through the heart. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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