I Was Rattled

I was minding my business, taking my time,
Ridin’ Ol’ Bess from the West Miller Mine
When all of a sudden, (weren’t nothing’ I did)
Bess started buckin’ and she hit the skids!

I was pitched off her back like a sack of no worth 
To land near the meanest dang rattler on earth!
His tounge was a-flickin’, tasting the air,
His eyes clouded over, like a blind man’s that pair.

He was longer than Bess with a full twelve-inch girth, 
My mettle dissolved to a pitiful dearth.
His head raised up proud, his tail even prouder
And that buzz just kept getting louder and louder!

His mien was aggressive and I was a wreck
So I pulled out my shooter and aimed for the neck!
Now I hate killing creatures; God’s watchin’ and all,
But he had my number and was dialin’ the call.

His head is still there, by the side of the trail
But I took the rest home, even that tail!
His meat fed me supper, yep, top o’ the line.
His hide and those rattles?  A hat-band so fine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:09 PM
Wow, Dean, some great writing!!!
Wood Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thanks again Kim. I enjoy writing the western poems.
Williams Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 2:09 AM
Really? Can you eat those things? Well Dean God was looking out for you. I bet that the hat band looks so fine. Great dramatic write my friend.....Maria
Wood Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 8:27 AM
hehe, Yes you can eat them. This is really more fiction than fact but inspired by a trip to the desert this weekend.
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:34 PM
OH MY, you even made dinner of him. This was GREAT cowboy poetry, Dean . I loved it.
Wood Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Thanks Andrea. Glad you enjoyed it!
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 2:34 PM
- Ate it ........ O.M.G. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wood Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Thanks for taking time to read this Anne-Lise!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 1:58 PM
You ate a rattle snake!! Oh..My.goodness! My stomach just turned. This poem sure had my attention. Have a nice day my friend.
Wood Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Darlene. Bon appetit !
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 12:50 PM
That would've been some big snake. I love these lines, "Now I hate killing creatures; God’s watchin’ and all, But he had my number and was dialin’ the call." He was gonna get ya unless you got em first, and ya made good use of his carcass, too!
Wood Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:50 PM
A little poetic license Lin. I exaggerated maybe a little! Bess is a jeep not a mule and it was only like three feet long. But what kind of story would that be?
Sands Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 12:26 PM
hmm...somehow the photo and poem are jumbled and I can't read it. I will have to come back to it later.
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