I view Father's view you see me I see you-

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...a summer in 2023

May be an image of 1 person, eyewear, hat and tree

I view Father's view
you see me I see you
the view outside
his clouded eyes
back drop summer green leaves

the clothes he wears
straw-hat brim
around bill shadow

I view Father's view
you see me I see you

demeaner still
checkered blue dark and light
white squares

happy to face
embraced-breathing God's grace
embraced-eyes covering dark shades
glasses
I look summer new heated day

I view Father's view
you see me I see you


the view outside
his clouded eyes
back drop summer green leaves

the clothes he wears
straw-hat brim
around bill shadow

I view Father's view
you see me I see you

demeaner still
checkered blue dark and light
white squares

I look a shroud 
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
I view Father's view
you see me I see you


2/7/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

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