I Get Along Without You Very Well

My life's been fine without you -- really has. 
A Belgian bar has opened in the square, 
and weekends, we do beer and tapas there, 
then Malcolm and Elaine's place, for some jazz 
and Jamieson's. May in Cortes -- what a blast! 
Right now, I'm growing sideburns! Summer hols, 
we'll all dress up as bandits and their molls! 
I've never laughed so much. Who needs the past? 

Yet sometimes, when the lake frowns in the rain, 
or April squalls tug blossoms from the trees, 
I think of you. This sadness preordained, 
like plane trees pollarded, proud amputees 
shorn of their plumes, emerges, stark and strange: 
and I know then. Some things will never change.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Godwin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 1:57 PM
VERY much a WOW! Your poem enchanted me. All the best ... CayCay
Coy Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:42 PM
I'm very grateful to you for your lovely comment!
White Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 12:45 AM
I love how you slowly move away from pain and sadness here, to a new you. With sometimes melancholy, but clearly moving on. Love the sonnet, great iambic pentamater.
White Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:18 AM
I am sorry, I just do... Poetry is not just my love, it's also what I study. I am doing an MA in Arabic poetry, for that reason I am well-versed in meter, prosody, poetics, our own, Greek, as well as Arabic meter ('arud, tafa'il). Before life happened, I also loved to dance, so rhyme and cadence is something innate I guess.
Coy Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 1:01 AM
How do you KNOW so much stuff???
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Busyness and laughter, then rain and sadness! Enjoyed the sonnet 7
Coy Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 10:52 PM
I'm glad you liked it, Kim. Thank you so much!
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