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I Am Not Chuck-Wills-Widow

I Am Not Chuck-Will’s-Widow Part I: Bullies, Lodging and Treats Whip-Poor-Will at twilight — Tremendous skyline. My wings ~ vainglorious, like a teen girl’s locks. Nightjar Goateater Bugeater Bully-based bias, cryptically colored along branches and leaves. And don’t step on me, but do hover near my nest if you’re a tasty treat, not a pest. Part II: HAUNTED away she flew, wild-eyed, pale, see-through; buried under my wings. the mourners nearly stepped on her; litterfall and cladodes - fear and delight at my whip-poor-will dirge. 7/23/2020 I am a Bird - Personification Poetry Contest Sponsor is Tania Kitchin

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Date: 8/4/2020 3:49:00 PM
Very creative writing here , Kim. Congrats in the contest. I hope all is going well with you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! <3
Date: 8/3/2020 4:45:00 AM
Cleverly done Kim mam.:-)I enjoyed your wonderful poem.Even I feel it should have placed higher:-(.Never mind there's lot more to come your way.Congratulations on your win:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring us.:-)Take care.Best wishes from Deepa:-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2020 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deepa! I appreciate that!
Date: 8/2/2020 4:39:00 AM
Wow Kim! This is such a brilliant and creative one. Congratulations on your win! Wish it was placed higher :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 5:04:00 AM
Me too, Aditi! Thank you so much! I was a bit shocked at the low placement but each judge judges as they will. I know I did research. The title was from the fact that the bird, chuck-wills-widow is often mistaken for the whip-poor-will. Thank you for your confidence in me. I really needed to hear it! Blessings to you!
Date: 8/1/2020 1:15:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 5:04:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/23/2020 7:29:00 PM
Well done Kim. This was terrific!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 8:45:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I had fun with this one!

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