How We Enter Paradise

Ode to a canvas print

Background: a sullen sky, pale 
light at horizon. Green-water sea 
of snowcapped swells, hint of 
nightfall in the breaking waves. 

Foreground: a bivouac of logs stand 
watch, side by side like siblings, 
darkened by salt and storm, oddly
illuminated at base, as if from 
some celestial flashlight. Shaped 
like a ship's prow, or nave of 
a church, alpha at shore, omega 
in the sea, signaling the way
to an infinity beach. 

"Here, You Enter," seems 
the summons, cradled for a while 
in a circle of safety, their gate
to the winds, your weary body's Zen, 
O Passenger, en route to the skies. 
Here you enter, here you end, 
in the arms of the sea. She, 
who absolves all pain 
and compromise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/27/2014 3:18:00 PM
Yes, I think I like it better without the reference to Walmart... Again, it's an excellent piece :)
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:41:00 AM
Well written piece with an interesting inspiration... By chance, if a person views a picture for the first time, in just the right light and at the right moment, the mind can wander into limitless places. The true gift is to be able to capture the moment with pen and paper, as you have here. :) enjoyed
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Nola Perez
Date: 1/27/2014 11:57:00 AM
Rex, Thank you, thank you. It's why I write, other than I have no choice. Getting the emotion in paper was hard. I just did another edit. Check it out.
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