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How We Enter Paradise

Ode to a canvas print Background: a sullen sky, pale light at horizon. Green-water sea of snowcapped swells, hint of nightfall in the breaking waves. Foreground: a bivouac of logs stand watch, side by side like siblings, darkened by salt and storm, oddly illuminated at base, as if from some celestial flashlight. Shaped like a ship's prow, or nave of a church, alpha at shore, omega in the sea, signaling the way to an infinity beach. "Here, You Enter," seems the summons, cradled for a while in a circle of safety, their gate to the winds, your weary body's Zen, O Passenger, en route to the skies. Here you enter, here you end, in the arms of the sea. She, who absolves all pain and compromise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/27/2014 3:18:00 PM
Yes, I think I like it better without the reference to Walmart... Again, it's an excellent piece :)
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:41:00 AM
Well written piece with an interesting inspiration... By chance, if a person views a picture for the first time, in just the right light and at the right moment, the mind can wander into limitless places. The true gift is to be able to capture the moment with pen and paper, as you have here. :) enjoyed
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Nola Perez
Date: 1/27/2014 11:57:00 AM
Rex, Thank you, thank you. It's why I write, other than I have no choice. Getting the emotion in paper was hard. I just did another edit. Check it out.

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