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How do we explore - - the depths of an abyss

In thickened woodlands there are hidden falls noticed by few and you stop - nature calls, you gaze rapt in wonder as waters flow into the depths of caves no creatures go. If you have wings, fly swift with the current feel exhilaration with the torrent but reaching the bottom of this chasm you know this journey is no phantasm. From on top, their depths seem like an abyss but the mighty falls turn streams bathed in bliss swirling lazily through thick banks of moss where waters run deep in rivers to cross. A final grand drama Nature now plays rivers curtsy to the seas so we praise. @jjote030824

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Date: 3/8/2024 11:15:00 PM
This is so beautiful, and serene, it felt like i can see through your well painted and woven words that flow so seamlessly. I especially love the delicate manner your opening lines are articulated. With excellent rhymes, leaving a captivating cadence. How creative. Pleasure reading this. A fave for me. Sending you light
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Josefina Costales
Date: 3/9/2024 2:50:00 PM
It is heart warming to read such an appreciative comment. Thanks Empress Ink.(I like your name said backwards - like royalty.) *smile*

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