Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Monorhyme

How Desperate Is Desperate

Sorrow tumbled into words, an antidote
When sobs choked; venom in the throat.
I hear in wrath, again, his disgusting gloat.
Follows, her muffled groans upon each smote. 
In a while, she whimpers in an awesome note. 
Probably, in pain, bearing his lusty frote. 
I lay jack-knifed, as ever, a vain mote.  
Tears overflow in such relations of fraught.
An unwanted witness I’ve been, still zygote.
Begetter that blessed me with love drought!
Who cares? My soul long for draught.
No more! I’m tired of being the scapegoat.
I pray to thee, free us of this cutthroat.
In time please, send us thy lifeboat!


Date:17/06/16

Placed 10 for contest Desperate Housewife by Poet Destroyer A (2/07/16)
Placed  2 for contest Sadness by Silent One (11/02/17)

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Sunita U.D Palawon February 11, 2017 at 10:41 PM Thanks Silent One for the contest and the 2nd place. Glad you appreciate. Congrats to all the winners! :))

Karam Misra July 3, 2016 at 8:26 PM You made the desperation really come through. Congrats on your win, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon July 4, 2016 at 8:05 AM Glad you saw it like this... Thanks :)

Richard Lamoureux July 3, 2016 at 8:36 AM Congrats on your win in Linda's contest.;0) Sunita U.D Palawon July 4, 2016 at 8:04 AM Thanks :)

Sunita U.D Palawon July 3, 2016 at 12:44 AM Thanks Linda for this contest and to all the juries for this placement. Congratulations to all the winners of this contest with their fabulous poem. :)

Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2016 at 11:54 PM Sunita, Congratulations on your Desperate House Wife WIN. I thank you for writing for my contest. Stop by my latest blog "UNION OF DISGUISING FACES "HZ1" blog #2." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Sunita U.D Palawon July 3, 2016 at 12:36 AM Thanks Linda, it has been a pleasure writing on that theme. There's so much to say...I'm so glad you like it. :) Sure will visit. Read your poems, great work! (Sent you a soup mail)

Poet Destroyer A June 26, 2016 at 8:27 AM Suited well... one of your best. Linda Sunita U.D Palawon June 27, 2016 at 8:24 AM Thanks Linda...OMG..I'm thrilled! I'm already getting hope of printing my poems as a collection! :D

Eve Roper June 18, 2016 at 12:43 PM Wow! This is such a good write, Suits, good luck in the contest. A 7 and already a winner:-) Hugs Eve Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2016 at 11:55 PM :D I'm thrilled you rated it at that! Thanks Eve, I do hope the juries like it. Sunita :)

Anoucheka Gangabissoon June 18, 2016 at 12:36 AM A great write on the plight of abused women ......Best of luck for the contest Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2016 at 11:57 AM Thanks my dear.:)

Skat A June 17, 2016 at 1:06 PM I bet she's going to love your poem. Which is a great attempt. Skat Sunita U.D Palawon June 17, 2016 at 11:09 PM Thanks Skat, I hope so. anyway I'm glad you like it.:)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2016 at 12:26 PM - ..... really desperate - Need lifeboat immediately - Very well written for the contest, Sunita !! - Good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sunita U.D Palawon June 17, 2016 at 11:07 PM Oh thanks a lot Sunshine for the encouraging words.:) Ya...some women and kids are really as desperate!:(

Sunita U.D Palawon June 17, 2016 at 10:48 AM This is my first attempt at Monorhyme and I do hope its good... and as I hold the cause of desperate wife at heart, I could not help writing on this theme. I hope you'll like it. :)