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It’s hotter than eighty degrees; less hot than the fourth of July; as hot as a warm summer breeze; far less than the sun in our sky. It’s as hot as I need it to be to enjoy some alone time with you. Let’s get naked here down by the sea. We’ll get hotter. . . THAT I guarantee! Written 7/30/2015 for the HOW HOT WAS IT!!!!! Contest of John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/17/2015 4:15:00 PM
PERFECT! Please know it is rare for me to use only one word. I'm full of words. You left me speechless except to explain! This was great fun! Clever!
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:47:00 AM
My screen is steaming up. Good work sis.
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:49:00 PM
Wow...any hotter and the screen would go up in flames, Andie! lol! Way to go! hugs
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Date: 8/1/2015 8:52:00 AM
How hot was it, really hot. Count me in Petal lol Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/31/2015 7:20:00 PM
G'day Andrea... watch out for the sunburn Andrea. You'll stay hotter for longer than your guarantee - Lindsay
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Date: 7/31/2015 11:07:00 AM
This aint just cool, it's HOT! Love, daver
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Date: 7/31/2015 8:31:00 AM
I have done some skinny dipping in my day. It is fun - but watch yourself in the sun. Hot poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/31/2015 5:31:00 AM
Wow real hot Andrea! Gl in contest!
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Date: 7/31/2015 3:09:00 AM
Sensitive, sensual and sense I always found in your verse. Like a swimmer in the sea I feel young, happy, and free.
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