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Hot diamonds glitter On an almost moonless night Burned eons ago

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 5:06:00 AM

Cannot start my day, Sara, unless I read one of your lovely poems.. this is a beautiful haiku from the master of haiku, U!.. thankxxx and appreciation for your encouraging comments on my poetry .. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

James Fraser

Date: 11/19/2009 12:33:00 PM

Starry starry nights, a most beautiful sight >> James

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/17/2009 8:39:00 AM

Nice.......{:-]>........that is my face by the way.... Do you see it?.......:JP]

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/17/2009 6:56:00 AM

Leaves the reader with an image that can spark the imagination! Nice! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/17/2009 5:52:00 AM

good imagery, enjoyed reading!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2009 5:52:00 AM

Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Sara. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/17/2009 1:06:00 AM

Very nice Haiku, Sara. Like your "Hot diamonds glitter". It is always surprising what three lines could express. I am going to move on coming Monday and will be offline for some time. but will be back on soup. Keep your pen flowing! Gert

Marty Owens

Date: 11/16/2009 6:52:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Sara...Love it...Marty

P Sheart

Date: 11/16/2009 3:02:00 PM

Yes, what is happening now has happed before what will happen already has. The stars tell us that. Good Haiku Sara. Love Light Patty