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Hidden Beneath

Never did a fire so fierce Blow across the land That same land His heart did grow Nourished by his sweat and toil No more The morning mist Will hear his weathered voice Call his horse Com'orn His mark Has been scorched from its soil And how that land Greens, grays And blacked haze With gusts of wind And rumpled hills The fathering face Of this dead man Hidden beneath

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Date: 4/2/2021 3:39:00 PM
I absolutely love this poem. It conjures up atmosphere and creeping doom. Yet it is powerfully emotional. I also like the description of 'rumpled hills'. Well done, and thank you for the read. xxjanine
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 7/10/2021 10:58:00 PM
Hi Janine, No matter how well you know the Australian bush, It can kill you in an instant in a thousand ways, But i think this is just not an Australian yarn anymore, but worldwide. Stay safe and thank you for your comment. Kind regards
Date: 4/2/2021 8:11:00 AM
Nice work, the emotion comes through well.
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 7/10/2021 10:59:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to comment Richard, sorry i took time in replying. Kind regards

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