Hell
ego's dominance
ushers to his sudden fall ~
disobedience
the six foes of mind
aggravate evil imprints~
hell unfurls its wings
make hell or heaven
no distinct dominions~
mind’s autonomy
the galactic stretch
intriguing is all His making~
out of line makes hell.
an unkind heart with
torrid heat, surged flow, harsh cold~
hell's incarnations
(torrid heat = anger; surged flow= greediness and jealous;
harsh cold = cruelty)
Placed : 10th
Hell Haiku Poetry Contest
Haiku poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
Date:28-03-2023
Copyright © Patri Venkata Ramana | Year Posted 2023
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