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Haven'T Gotten Over You

Peeking through my corner bedroom window playing hide and seek the ocean's breath pushes through the semitransparent white curtains allowing the sun to shine and smile upon my half-opened squinted eye. I close my eyes and try to dream dream of that night dream of you and me that star filled summer sky laying on a blanket overlooking the sea that glimmer as I gazed into your eyes I remember your killer little smile as we talked of the future I blushed when you touched my chest oh how fast my heart did beat after only one sip of wine I knew you were going to be mine and I was going to be all yours It seems just like yesterday enjoying a perfect moonlight kiss you wrapped in my arms how could one ever forget now twenty years or so have passed and I still haven't gotten over you yet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/21/2015 1:57:00 PM
Lovely poem, Tim. Brings back memories.
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Date: 8/20/2015 1:08:00 PM
Twenty years?... I thought you were a romantic... sweet young thing... yourself. Should have known that anyone who can be that romantic and draw us in so completely has a little experience with the pen and la amour... You still make me sigh! I think you've become the 'Sigh Master'! A worthy title I do think.
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:36:00 AM
You paint a picture with words that makes the reader feel them...this is hard to accomplish and you done it well. Emile. #7
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:13:00 AM
Wow...haunting images there, Tim. This is such a poignant and romantic piece. 7. PS. Even the capcha says AAA...:-)
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Date: 8/20/2015 8:15:00 AM
Lovely and very touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/20/2015 7:52:00 AM
Are you going steady at the moment??? Cause perhaps you and I....
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Date: 8/19/2015 7:42:00 PM
Great poem my friend. Always you poems are uplifting and a pleasure to read!A7
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Date: 8/19/2015 5:17:00 PM
Oh is this deja vu ? I just posted a poem about the ocean and love from the past : ). This is such a beauty Tim , and I love the detailed descriptions you give, makes it feel so real. A gem! A fav too !
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Date: 8/19/2015 4:08:00 PM
Why is it every time I read your work all I can do is picture you smiling, go figure!
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