Harridan's

"Qui*, whose harridan are you now?"  
this withered crone you see all bone
was once a bloom your sweet coquette
yet, years have not been kind to we.

Each maid becomes a mother
"Qui, whose harridan are you now?"  
Men bleed us dry as beaten wheat
upon a dusty floor we lie.

Those maids who lived to birth and nurse 
now possess but hairy lipped sighs. 
"Qui, whose harridan are you now?  
and where is he who loved that youth?"

They have no horrid name for he,
our aged counterparts of limp form
though stud has come and gone, we ask.
"Qui, whose harridan are you now?"  


* Qui means WHO in french 
* harridan origin 1690–1700;  perhaps alteration of French haridelle
  thin, worn-out horse, large, gaunt woman (compared with the initial
  element of haras  stud farm, though derivation is unclear) 
** 89 years later Madam Guillotine's reigned perhaps woman don't like
    being called names?
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Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Isn't it a shame he changed that contest?? I too did something different from heroines. Just coming back here and admiring this one.
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 1:09 AM
LOVE this, Debs. Way to do the word harridan.
D. Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 10:27 AM
awesome ,
Grisetti Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 9:44 AM
Beautiful quatern, and a great use of the repeated line. I do believe that as an interrogative pronoun, qui would be more accurate that que, as you are referring to the harridan's maker, owner? Que would be correct if you mean what circumstance.
Peranteau Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 8:52 AM
They call those men...dead beats...they call them....whore mongers ! Need I go on ! And if you be the "harridan" dear poet, you must have just cause ! I always did dream of being that night in shinning armor, 'till the rust set in as the gray, while my words through my rusty mask still made her blush...yet who am I, to challenge the young "studs" ! Great write Debbie ! Have a fantastic week....much love, james
Grisetti Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 9:46 AM
James, what is the male equivalent for nag, shrew, hag, etc. Why do we have so many words for old women and not old men? Do women outlive men? Or do men think of themselves as forever young?
Goff Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 8:21 AM
well done.....I believe most of us have periods of this malais? jimbo
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 8:08 AM
If I used the french wrong some one let me know! [maybe it should be Qui?]
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