Greybreak - Cq

grey hoar frost skies entomb daybreak muted sunrise ……a softened crunch 8/31/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2019 6:09:00 PM

Outstanding work, John. For me, one of the best on the list.

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2019 11:42:00 AM

John congratulations on your win, excellent ***

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 11:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Haiku, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 9/18/2019 7:13:00 AM

Nice imagery John. Great poetry my friend. These are the mornings we love to wake up to. Very well done. Congratulations on your win. All the best.. Charlie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2019 6:58:00 AM

We are beginning to get the crunch of autumn because of a very dry 6 weeks and leaves are turning brown. I can imagine the morning you are describing but alas we have only heat and not fog today. Thanks for the win in your contest and for stopping by to comment on my work. Sara

John Lawless
Date: 9/18/2019 1:10:00 PM

Hey, Sara, we are beginning to feel the touch of flannel.....