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Gooseberries and Sharp Creases

GOOSEBERRIES AND SHARP CREASES
The plumpest, juiciest, hairiest gooseberries My grandfather grew in a circular bed, Dead centre of the immaculate lawn. And blackcurrants under netting, And a Victoria plum tree in the far corner. He taught me to hitch up my trousers at the knee When I sat down, to avoid spoiling the creases. And to touch the peak of my cap When I passed a lady in the street. But he was a sick man; Tuberculosis and diabetes that would send him Into long, deep comas. He would have taught me a whole lot more, But for that final coma. 1st July 2020 In Loving Memory Poetry Contest Sponsor - Regina Riddle

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Date: 7/7/2020 1:19:00 PM
Your muse is really heartfelt Bryn. Your grandfather seems to have taught you a lot of things. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/5/2020 3:43:00 PM
A wonderful well crafted memory in poetic form. God bless you with many more amazing works of art. Love and prayers
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